I know there are a few writers who read this blog. I would appreciate any feedback you might have about the style of writing I have, in relation the Star Trek story I'm currently writing. If you think it's good, if you think it needs improvement, how you think it could be improved, etc. I'm just talking about my ability to write, rather than on the story itself. :-)

I'd be very happy for your feedback that I'll use to help me write better. Many thanks!